here's a primary draft of the intro...i used ...smthin like technical...or rather official language...go thru it..tell me where to change...whether to make it humorous or the more formal one does good.... and yeah...i need to put in a starting line for which i need you to to tell me exactly what the meaning of the hindi word drishtant is..
here goes...without the first line of course...
Formed in 1996, Drishtant has evolved from being just the literary society of MANIT( formerly MACT) to a versatile society which endeavours for the all round development of an individual by building confidence, improving verbal skills, harnessing creativity and inducing all such qualities that are essential for having a good persona; and all this is implemented by events which involve active participation of a person, apart from being a lot of fun and providing a healthy interactive environment.
as you see dis is a bit on da formal side....i kept it short and tried to put everythin in more generalized terms so that the basic idea is conveyed...do respond with full blast criticism....
sachit..
ppl pls reply to these articles,we need to get the discussion underway so tht the site can strt off
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2 comments:
nice and simple
but a little bit of comedy would help
kudos for the def... as in explains the society purpose and atmo completely...
incorporate a line or two on the emotions in it(funny if possible)
small enuf for an intro
whatever he said buddy ... clear!
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